Haiku

[dancinghorse]

Meme! In Haiku!

Haiku2 for dancinghorse
had achieved a lovely one it goes like this before dust storms yes
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Created by Grahame

Comments

[pgranzeau.livejournal.com]

"had achieved a" sounds like four syllables when I speak it. Is that "had achievéd a" (turning "achieved" into a three syllable word)? :)

[maryosmanski.livejournal.com]

I tried three times to get something that sounded like poetry, but somehow words like "google it" and "German class" (not properly capitalized!) and the number "2008" just aren't very poetic. I guess I'm to blame for the words I use when I make LJ posts.